Thank you for joining The Ink Well and sharing your story with our community, @praizking. You'll want to consider some ways to improve your writing, as this story is full of errors. We are all about quality and engagement in The Ink Well.

Here are some important notes as you get to know our community:

• Please be sure to read The Ink Well community rules at the top of The Ink Well community home page.
• We ask everyone who posts in The Ink Well to read and comment on at least two other writers' work in the community for every story published.
• We keep a watchful eye out for spam and plagiarism, which are not tolerated.
• You can find an overview of our community and what we're about in our manifesto.
• We provide weekly writing prompts to inspire our community of writers.
• You can find many fiction writing resources in our catalog of fiction writing tips.

In particular, we recommend the article, Help for the Grammatically Challenged, which provides important tips on how to use Google Docs to draft your stories. It will point out errors that need to be fixed, and you can fix them by clicking on them.

Again, welcome.