Your story is intense and engaging. You did such a nice job of building the characters, the scenario and the conflict(s). The outcome is not a totally happy one, but the resolution to the story is well done. This story is successful because it blends action, dialogue and narrative really well, and has a clear story arc — the things we look for in quality short stories!
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How well you put it, thank you so much for reading this piece.