This is a very good example of creative nonfiction. You have selected a memorable event in your life. You have explained why it was memorable and why the event has significance for you. Your descriptions of Vanessa, the coffeehouse where you meet her and other settings are vivid.Hello @pjpavan,
Then you explain your emotional growth, the painful process you went through. There is a universal element to this description. Just about everyone has had a love, and lost it. This is almost part of growing up, of maturing.
Very good job on your first try out. The most valuable part of your essay is its authenticity. There is no affectation in your narrative. You are honest. Your feelings are raw.These are qualities that draw a reader in, and also that make the essay meaningful to us.
Thank you for joining in the nonfiction 'trial' @pjpavan.
Thank you very much for your comment and for this new topic of non-fiction experiment, it is a good opportunity for all of us who write history and I am grateful to you, for me it is a pleasure to participate here in the community the ink well.