Greetings, @pjpavan Thank you so much for coming up with this fictional story that has characteristics of autobiography.
We often provide feedback to writers who are just getting started. The Ink Well has some great resources in our catalog of fiction writing tips. For example, we have tips on developing characters in your stories, and integrating action, dialog and narrative. These resources can help you learn how to include the important elements of fiction in your stories.
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@theinkwell, Thank you very much for your comment and advice, I hope to do better for the next one and I hope to get better and better.