Thank you for sharing your story with The Ink Well. It is never a good idea to drink and drive. Very lucky for Jose that his friends were in the right place at the right time to help him.
Just a note to assist you in your writing journey. Good fiction usually has a conflict/ resolution format, that’s what makes it interesting. If you want to know more it’s a good idea to read @janyna ‘ s writing tips, which you can find at the links below.
Please remember to engage with other writers in the community.
@theinkwell, Thank you for your advice and for creating the challenge of the week, it is my first participation since you created the weekly challenges.