hello @oyebolu. Your piece would have benefited from an edit in Grammarly to identify and correct spelling errors, and fix issues with grammar and punctuation. Your piece was challenging to read in places. You also provided several different presentations of dialogue. This inconsistency should be avoided. We expect our writers to submit pieces that focus on quality. Kindly read our pinned post and follow the link to our posts on writing tips to learn more about how to write dialogue in fiction and how to use speech marks. We also require all of our writers to support at least two other stories in the community each time they wish to submit one of their own. Unfortunately, when key requirements are missing, the curation vote is impacted.