Good dialogue and scene setting. Your story spills the facts about life on the underside of Lagos very well. You’ve evoked the raw hardship, but you’ve achieved your description in jaunty terms that make for interesting reading. Nicely done!

One thing, though, take note of your punctuation - for instance:-

“My parents are fine”
“You don come again(you have come again” I replied.

Should read

“My parents are fine.”
“You don come again(you have come again).” I replied.

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