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RE: THAT WINDING ROAD

in The Ink Well3 years ago

Our narrator is both fortunate, and unfortunate. He was unfortunate to be in the bank when the robbery occurred, and unfortunate to have his money stolen. However, he survived. And, it seems he will prevail over challenging circumstances.

Have you read and commented on the work of at least two other writers this week? (See The Ink Well community rules on our home page.) This helps our community thrive, and also makes you eligible to be chosen for a spotlight in our weekly highlights magazine. Thank you!Thank you for sharing this story with us, @oluwashinaayomi. Although you tell the story as a flashback, you manage to keep the story line coherent. That is not easy in this format.

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Thanks for taking your time to read through.
I do read stories from other writers, even though I hardly leave comment. I will try as much as I can to at least comment on 5 stories before the end of this week.