This is a tantalizing narrative. It is tantalizing in that it leads us to ask many questions. It is obvious the protagonist is a journey that his father began years before. This journey is dangerous and full of mystery. Your imagery is good. It would be more satisfying for readers to know more about the father and the father's work.

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