Hi and welcome back, @muba04. Thanks for posting in The Ink Well. We do need to remind you of our rules, which are posted at the top of The Ink Well community home page. Two important notes:

• We do not allow stories that portray violence. Since the violence is not graphic, we will leave it. But please choose other themes.
• We expect everyone who publishes in The Ink Well to be an active member of our community and to read and comment on the work of other members.

We would also like to direct you to some resources that can help you on your writing journey. Please see our catalog of fiction writing tips which provides many great resources for writers who are just starting out. In particular, please see the post Help for the Grammatically Challenged. It provides tips for using Google Docs to draft your posts. You can do this on a PC or a smart phone. Google Docs will point out errors in grammar and wording choice, which you can then fix by clicking on them.

Thank you!