You have a great sense of horror. You build atmosphere slowly. You are never impatient to reach the climax. And your punch line really hits home.
A very good job with this short story. Thank you for posting it in the Ink Well community.
You have a great sense of horror. You build atmosphere slowly. You are never impatient to reach the climax. And your punch line really hits home.
A very good job with this short story. Thank you for posting it in the Ink Well community.
Thanks for the support. I love writing this kind of stories. Whenever I can I will publish :))