This story is rich in conflict. We understand Anny's apprehension about committing and we understand her dismay when Chris shows up with another woman. You set the scene very well, and you express the concept of blossoming because Anny is finally ready to commit.

While it is perfectly fine for readers to wonder at Chris' loyalty (honesty) you might do more to give readers a clue as to how this story might work out. The resolution, as it stands is less than satisfying. A fine story, though, with solid emotional content.

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