This is a beautiful take on doorway, which offers a magical environment to explore as we read. However, it would have been nice to learn more about the main character in this fun fantasy story.

The Ink Well has some great resources in our catalog of fiction writing tips. For example, we have tips on developing characters in your stories, and integrating action, dialog and narrative. These resources can help you learn how to include the important elements of fiction in your stories.

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