Your story is very suspenseful, @kzxixs. You did a great job of creating a mysterious and frightening scenario. We only wish that we found out in the end why Lola was stalking her!
Thank you for sharing your story in The Ink Well, and for reading and commenting on the work of other community members.
Thank you very much, I appreciate your comment. I wanted to leave several aspects of the story to the reader's imagination, but personally I think Becky was just another victim, Lola focused on her because she was the first one she met. But of course, everyone can interpret it as they like.