This was quite a fantasy, something that might happen in a dream. You describe the scene vividly. You share feelings of despair and loneliness. And you use the blossoming prompt well.

The story is wonderful, but you might want to change the word 'wonder' which you seem to use instead of wander. It is an easy spelling mistake to make but it is rather significant in your story.

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