Creating a solid trail towards a tear-jerking conclusion is really difficult to accomplish. However, you’ve done it here with aplomb! This bittersweet tale, so lyrically told, does not let the reader down for one second : you’ve got originality, a strong story arc, beautiful visually imparted scenes and characters that the reader immediately cares about. Very well done!
I've never felt so delighted with a comment like this one. Thank you so much. I appreciate this.