In more than one place your text contains gross errors, both factual and grammatical.

She came to the Prophet and started drinking water. He was hiding in the thicket, on whom he was preparing to attack, and he became a hungry lion, on whom he was ready to attack. Saw Khush Kuchi and there was long grass, thought that the lightning struck the window and caught fire in it.

Please consult our literature in order to improve your story writing.

The Ink Well community rules at the top of The Ink Well community home page. We expect everyone who publishes in The Ink Well to be an active member of our community. We ask every writer to read and comment on at least two other stories for each one published.

We also have some tips for you. The Ink Well has some great resources in our catalog of fiction writing tips.
We recommend the article, Help for the Grammatically Challenged, which provides important tips on how to use Google Docs to draft your stories. It will point out errors that need to be fixed, and you can fix them by clicking on them.

The Ink Well is devoted to encouraging quality fiction writing and community engagement. You will find if you take the time to improve your writing and fix grammatical errors, you will receive higher curation on your posts.