Hello @joreneagustin An interesting story you have there, thank you for sharing it in The Ink Well.

Bullying is a problem that sadly exists in our schools, but there will always be good people who face those bullies, stop their wrong doings, and stand up for the truth, just like Joshua did in your story.

I like the way you describe the setting, emotions, and dialog between the characters. However, there are many grammar issues in your writing, which made it hard to overlook.

I see that you have been directed before to check our Help for the Grammatically Challenged, and I would emphasize again that it would help you greatly to correct those grammar issues in your stories.

I would also like to suggest again visiting and commenting on the work of other writers in The Ink Well community. (See The Ink Well community rules on our home page.) This helps our community thrive, and also makes you eligible to be chosen for a spotlight in our weekly highlights magazine.