You do such a nice job with character portrayal, @jjmusa2004. It is not easy to do, especially in the space of a short story. Character development, combined with great action and dialogue make this story very readable, engaging, and enjoyable. Thank you for sharing your story in The Ink Well, and for reading and commenting on the work of other community members.
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Thank you very much, I'm glad it's enjoyable and I appreciate you for motivating me to do better