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RE: John's bicycle | La bicicleta de Juan (ENG-SPA)

in The Ink Well10 months ago

Excellent story, @janaveda. You have crafted an excellent conflict, as well as wonderful suspense and pacing, and a great combination of action, dialogue and narrative. Nicely done! Thank you for sharing your story in The Ink Well, and for reading and commenting on the work of other community members.

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At the contrary. Thanks to you for providing excellent posts with valuable tips for writers to grow in their skills.

It is always a pleasure to participate and share with community members.

Greetings.