An imaginative piece, Innfauno, with some rather detailed and descriptive narrative! These scenes do not always quite make sense alongside each other though. The piece felt comedic in nature, as if you were looking, at each turn, to add another bizarre twist to the story. Sometimes less is more though, and a more focused story line usually produces a better outcome.

I'm curious, was this piece written in English or translated from an original language text? Please bear in mind that translated pieces should have the original text published alongside or beneath the English translation when posting in The Ink Well.