Malice, whispering in the ears of the crowd. Is this not the spirit that rules in every mob? Your personification of this entity drives the story. Such a spirit has been proactive in legends throughout human history. How do we account for evil, for the murmur that tempts us?

Your characterization of a malevolent spirit is on the mark, worthy of a Faust.

Boo indeed. Never was boo used to such great effect. Wonderful job with the descriptions, with the arc, with the sway of the narrative. Thank you for sharing this story with us. We appreciate very much that you support other writers with your comments.