hello @glory-clarkson, your image sourcing is still not correct and we are unable to curate your submission until you rectify this. We would highly recommend that you take the time to read our previous feedback which encouraged you to engage with other members of the community, to support at least two other posts for each post you submit, and to make yourself aware of the attributes of fiction that we are looking for here in The Ink Well.
Thank you @theinkwell for your guidance I will be sure to show support and engage with others as well.
I've started reading on your guidelines for fiction and so far I'm loving it.
Thank you.
That's really good to hear. The resources available are excellent and have helped many writers to develop and hone their craft. I have used many of them myself! Writing fiction has some key metrics that need to be employed in order to draw the reader in, keep them interested, and get them invested in the lives of the characters, and the outcome of the story. Without a good hook, character and story development, a conflict with resolution, and balance between narrative, action, and dialogue, you can't really have a good piece of fiction writing. Instead of lifting off the page, the writing can feel a little flat. It's really enjoyable when you begin to experiment more beyond pure narrative writing. We look forward to seeing what you bring us next!
By the way, be sure to look at your last sentence. It just stops in the middle. So your story is not complete.