You bring us a well-written piece - an introspective and contemplative narrative on depression. Too many people do not understand the devastating impact that depression can have on a person's life and how it is not something that one can simply 'snap out of'. Thank you for sharing your experience so candidly with The Ink Well community. Please bear in mind that for creative non-fiction, we are also looking for aspects of good fiction like action and dialogue to balance the narrative and to drive the story forward. Another point to note is that when English translations are required, it is important to edit the translation using a spell checker and grammar checker before publishing.
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Hi! It was a pleasure for me to share this little piece of my journey related to depression.
Thank you very much for the recommendations, I will try to be more careful about the grammatical part of English from now on.
I hope you are well.