Hi @fortropro. Your story brings us a rich interpretation of Igbo culture, an it is a very interesting read. We have some feedback for you. The first note is that in stories we look for some kind of resolution at the end of the story. It does not have to be a happy ending, but the primary conflict of the story should be resolved in some way.

The second note is that this story was detected as partially written with AI. We allow use of Grammarly for grammatical and spelling checks, but we ask writers in The Ink Well not to use rephrasing tools like Quillbot for revising stories. These tools result in AI detection, and it will impact how we curate your story. Thank you.