Sorry, @doubleworld, but this story was muted in The Ink Well community. Please read our community rules, which are posted at the top of The Ink Well community home page. We don't allow stories featuring violence against women.
Because stories about the abuse, rape and murder of women have been so prevalent in The Ink Well (along with gore and violence in general), we also published an article explaining our stance on violence and brutality. Please read it.
Your writing is very good. We look forward to seeing more fiction from you when it complies with our community rules. Thank you.