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RE: Journey of the Heart: An unforgettable encounter

in The Ink Welllast year

This is a cute take on the prompt, which offers a whimsical encounter of two like-minded souls. However, it would have been wonderful to see the addition of dialogue, as well as more character development.

These are two important elements of quality fiction that can bring a story to life. You have done a very nice job with the narrative, but it would be even better if you told some of the story in action, and added dialogue so the characters speak to each other. Here are a few resources for you:

Thank you for sharing your story with us, and for your engagement with other members of the community.