You use many familiar constructs from ghost stories and horror movies in this tale, @cojonac97. A woman in a Victorian-era gown, a couple that is in disagreement about the imminent dangers (with one saying "it's just the old house and wind playing tricks"), multiple blood-curdling screams, household items swirling around a room and a near-miss escape! The only thing missing is the truly hackneyed "It was a dark and stormy night" opening!

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