Hello @chuksmeezy,

We have a policy about It was all a dream stories--we don't like them. However, you pull a rabbit out of the hat with this one. Although Lucy explains that it was all a dream, the phone rings again! A phone that never rang. So, readers are left to wonder, was it a dream? Has her crisis truly ended?

Your first line, your hook, in the story is wonderful. We are pulled fully into Lucy's scary living room. You use dialog well and have a knack for creating atmosphere. Well done.

Thank you for sharing this story with us, @chuksmeezy.