Your scene-setting is perfectly done to reflect the foreboding onset of a devastating disease. Sam’s journey of self-discovery is well paced and the reader resonates with his heartbreaking decision. Nicely done!
Your scene-setting is perfectly done to reflect the foreboding onset of a devastating disease. Sam’s journey of self-discovery is well paced and the reader resonates with his heartbreaking decision. Nicely done!
I'm glad to hear the scene-setting and pacing worked well to convey the difficult emotions associated with Sam's journey and his heartbreaking decision in the face of a terminal illness. It means a lot to me that you felt the reader could resonate with his experience. Thanks for reading and stopping by.