Well done, @brujita18
We recognize this Faustian bargain: one makes a pact with the devil and is not likely to enjoy the benefits. Your angle--morocotas disintegrating and all goods enjoyed from treasure disappearing--is good.
You certainly handle the theme well and create a credible, recognizable character. Thank you for sharing this story with us. We do not see your comments on the stories of other Inkwell writers. We do expect this engagement from our authors.
Thank you for sharing this story, with the ancient theme, for the September contest with us.
Hello friends!
Thank you for your comment and appreciation. Of course I'm already going to stroll through the works of my hivers friends to soak up the magic and color in their stories Greetings!