There is an interesting wordplay between these two characters. They are as engaged intellectually as they are physically. Their intelligence is as much, or perhaps more an attraction for them than their physical aspects. You do a good job with dialogue. We are persuaded by the end that these two are likely a great match. Just enough tension to keep things interesting but also enough respect to strengthen the bond between them.

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