You definitely cannot tell a book by its cover. That is a good message in your story, @ayin.

Just so you are aware, we are now asking all community members to publish just one story weekly in The Ink Well.

We also have some tips for you. The Ink Well has some great resources in our catalog of fiction writing tips.
We recommend the article, Help for the Grammatically Challenged, which provides important tips on how to use Google Docs to draft your stories. It will point out errors that need to be fixed, and you can fix them by clicking on them.

The Ink Well is devoted to encouraging quality fiction writing and community engagement. You will find if you take the time to improve your writing and fix grammatical errors, you will receive higher curation on your posts.