You write a story with a great message, @aloysiusmbaba. We can often change ourselves in ways we think not possible. A good friend is one instrument in helping us to make those changes, if we have the courage to listen.

There are many names introduced in the beginning of your story. It's hard to keep track of the different characters, although with effort we can see the relationship between Sean and Kim develop. Also, the connection to the prompt is not as clear as it might be. The relationship between the friends extends beyond high school, but this is not really the significance of the prompt.

The story has a strong protagonist and good arc. Thank you for sharing this with us.