We share, through this #CNF, in some candid moments between three brothers who clearly have a tight bond. There is silliness and hilarity, an enjoyment of the moment. You must have enjoyed having your brother home for the holidays. I wonder if he home again this year and what you three might be up to as we move into Christmas.
There was a hint of conflict and a difference of opinion shared in the stories told by the brothers. this reader would have liked to have seen this aspect developed more so as to create space for character development and growth to produce one or more strong character arcs in the story. Exploring their relationship and how their bonds grew so tight would also have been a nice angle.
Thank you for sharing this joyful story from your life with The Ink well.
Thanks @theinkwell for reading and for your very positive comment. Yes, my older brother is around for this year's celebrations and we are going to make the most of it with the rest of the family.
Once again thanks for reading. I wish you a happy holidays and a prosperous new year in advance.