dream and her

in The Ink Well7 days ago (edited)

Ali sleep night late maybe four little after four dream come alley fog wind cold smell he see her she stand he heart beat fast he no know what do
She smile say “you here” Ali uh dream maybe he try step lamp blink light small wind move feel near he think want talk maybe no possible she married now no meet real life
Ali quiet no talk no touch only heart love keep silent maybe wrong no he try no wrong just heart dream place only here real no place
He walk step lamp flicker smell wind cold she near feel happy feel sad little strange think maybe yes maybe no heart beat fast
Ali remember night before dream start dream alley lamp fog smell she smile again he try say something nothing she look smile he heart jump
Morning come light open eye feel weird strange happy-sad remember dream she there he no touch no talk only heart
He think maybe only dream real no good real she married he no possible meet only heart keep love silent no one know only him maybe true love maybe maybe not
He sit think maybe dream place only lamp blink wind move cold she near smile heart jump little sad little happy confuse don’t know no know
He remember walk step alley fog dream dream dream she smile talk little he try heart beat too fast too too want talk no can’t real married no meet
Ali sit maybe heart dream only real no only heart love keep quiet silent no talk no call maybe dream maybe real maybe love maybe maybe
Wind blow lamp blink she smile he heart jump step try say no just feel just heart dream cold fog smell lamp
Morning open eye light strange happy-sad heart love only heart dream real dream real maybe true love maybe
He think no meet no talk no touch only heart maybe safe maybe wrong no only dream alley fog lamp wind smell smile heart beat
He sit think maybe maybe dream maybe real maybe love maybe only heart love silent maybe maybe maybe

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@theinkwell I don't know what's going on is his head. I am to Fed up to care about Muhammad Saqib. His skills r not on shitty like his above post.

At this point it's easier to downvote and call it a day then to argue or think about it.

I'm extremely sorry I didn't know the rules before

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