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RE: The Special Bond | The Inkwell Prompt #61

in The Ink Well3 years ago

This story was developed rather beautifully. The relationship between the fairy and the bee was a precious reminder that no life is insignificant. I was both happy to see that she had found her human, and then sad that this portion of the story was so quick to resolve. It would have been interesting to see a bit more of the reasons behind his inability to reach out to her. Very much enjoyed this story, @kemmyb

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It would have been interesting to see a bit more of the reasons behind his inability to reach out to her.

I know! I had it all in my head but the word count was almost hitting the mark laid down by Ink Well. I didn't want to cross it and also make it easy for others to read. Not everyone can stand a lengthy story.

Thanks for highlighting this. I appreciate your lovely comment. 🙂