OMG - I listened to this again just then. I just SAW this story play out in cinematic detail - the ambiguity of what happened to him and her running out of the catacombs, devastated - but eventually getting on a bus out of Paris with this song playing in the background, a small smile on her face... did she do it or not? How reliable is her memory? Did she just leave him to be lost in the dark? Credits roll.....
Ah, I want to rewrite this as a longer narrative now... so cool, thanks for the musical addition...
I wanted a longer narrative when I read it 🙂 all those questions come to you at the end of your story. Thankfully folks like Paul Simon and Riverflow have creative talent 😁 I just paste songs that sound right in comments lol
Ha good one!!! 'A ghost did it, officer' 🤪👻
OMG - I listened to this again just then. I just SAW this story play out in cinematic detail - the ambiguity of what happened to him and her running out of the catacombs, devastated - but eventually getting on a bus out of Paris with this song playing in the background, a small smile on her face... did she do it or not? How reliable is her memory? Did she just leave him to be lost in the dark? Credits roll.....
Ah, I want to rewrite this as a longer narrative now... so cool, thanks for the musical addition...
I wanted a longer narrative when I read it 🙂 all those questions come to you at the end of your story. Thankfully folks like Paul Simon and Riverflow have creative talent 😁 I just paste songs that sound right in comments lol