Poem about the sky🏙☁️

in The Ink Well11 months ago (edited)

Oh, the skies above, a sight to behold,
A canvas of wonders, a story untold.
From dawn's first light to twilight's embrace,
The beauty of the skies, no words can replace.

At the break of day, as the sun starts to rise,
Colors burst forth, painting the skies.
A golden hue spreads across the horizon,
Welcoming the world with warmth and pride.

As the day unfolds, the sky changes its face,
From clear and bright to clouds in graceful embrace.
Puffy clouds, like cotton candy,
Drifting lazily, carried by the gentle air.

And when the sun begins to descend,
The sky puts on a show, a spectacle to attend.
A colour show , a breathtaking sight,
As the day bids farewell, and turns to night.

The hues of pink and orange, like a fiery dance,
With a blend purple and blue, a celestial romance.
The setting sun paints the clouds,
Creating a masterpiece, a moment of bliss.

And as darkness falls, the stars twinkle bright,
A sprinkle of diamonds, lighting up the night.
The moon, a guiding light in the velvet sky,
Casting a magical glow, as time slips by.

So, let us gaze up at the skies above,
In awe of its beauty, in reverence and love.
For the skies, my friends, are gifts.
A reminder of the wonders that in this world, we find.

I hope this write-up captures the enchanting beauty of the skies. They hold endless mysteries and breathtaking moments, reminding us to appreciate the wonders that surround us. 🌌✨

Images taken by me @stephanie4359
Words/poem by me @stephanie4359

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It is noticeable that you took your time to describe and decipher each moment of the day when the sky shines and dresses in colors and shades. In addition to the poem that is accompanied by good photographs that help the imagination to capture the meaning of your words, and the best thing is that they belong to you. Grateful for the wonders of creation. Congratulations, good job

Thank you so much 💓

Hello @stephanie4359 and welcome to The Ink Well!

We are a writing community for short stories. While your poem was quite beautiful, taking us through the changing face of the skies during the course of a day, it is not something that fits within our community, and may be better suited to the Blockchain poets community.

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Wonderful poem
I love that you took your time to appreciate such beautiful creation

This is a rather touching poem if I do say so myself and I believe it should garner more attention in other communities

Ohh
Thank you so much
Hope to write more 😊