I could feel in the place,
so the setting is ok. (I'm just starting to read, here in theinkwell, some writing concepts).
The dialogs seem also ok.
Good story.
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I could feel in the place,
so the setting is ok. (I'm just starting to read, here in theinkwell, some writing concepts).
The dialogs seem also ok.
Good story.
Oh , something is missing? Well I'm not a pro when it comes to story writing..lol
I Will love to know what's missing.... We learn everyday to become better.
Thanks for stopping by
Nothing missing.
Keep up the good work,
Alright... You'll get to read more as time goes on..
Thanks