Favour had this burning hate in his chest for Justin Martin and his crew, they were part of the baseball team and that made them arrogant and bombus. They picked on the weak and that made Favour an easy target, they would make him very uncomfortable during his stay through highschool. Favour would be fun of it and be a laughing stock. Favour was a Christian but he didn't believe the part of the bible that said,"Forgive and Forget", because he can't forgive nor forget what Justin and his crew did to him.
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Well, thank you for avoiding any description of violence or abuse (this includes bullying). While your story revolved around the idea, you managed to keep it to a minimum.
It was a massive feat to ambush and do what Favour did to his bullies, they must have learned their lesson.
Thank you for sharing that story with The Ink Well, we appreciate your engagement in comments on other writers' posts.
It can be difficult to forgive and forget, but there's plenty of wisdom in the bible (by the way you misspelled "bible" with "buble").
An eye for an eye turns the whole world blind, but at the same time, impunity can be as dangerous.
So I guess, like in most cases, it can be hard to judge.
Hi @sonofremi. I often provide feedback to emerging writers. You have a lot of opportunities to improve your writing. For example, I was confused by the very first sentence, since "bombus" is not a word. Do you mean "bombastic"?
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In particular, please see the post Help for the Grammatically Challenged. It provides tips for using Google Docs to draft your posts. You can do this on a PC or a smart phone. Google Docs will point out errors in grammar and wording choice, which you can then fix by clicking on them.
Following those guidelines can really help to improve your writing and result in greater rewards. Good luck and keep writing.