[ The Unclosed Gate Was Not Opened ] - The Ink Well January fiction contest

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Once upon a time, there was a princess who lived within a high castle with a strong fortress in front. She had lived there for ages, and the older she got the thicker she ordered her military to build the fortress. Princess was alone, her existence was tagging along with tons of devilish things hidden behind layers of walls. She had no idea since when they had always been there, but she knew for sure those grotesque were not meant to be grotesque. They were something else, before transforming into those dreadful figures. One day, from the highest glass stared down the princess, she noticed an exhausted knight was passing by her place. He fainted at the obverse of the main gate. She demanded the guards to open the entrance, and she ran down to the unconscious silver-armored knight.

“I can’t fight with you since it’s your own battle, but remember, whenever you need me, I’ll be here. For you.” Her message was sent after a lasting struggle inside her head, and even his being one. “You are safe when you are with me.”

“Thank you.” His reply arrived in a polite manner which she hoped it had not shown up.

But the knight’s wound was so severe that he had to rest beside the princess’s fortress. She could not let him in, because of the unacceptable creatures she had been keeping around her greenish garden. Little princess did not want the newly coming knight to be threatened away. She ran down to him almost every night, as time flew, she realized a strange sentiment had been sown in her heart. Fairly, the knight would give her a sign when he needed her as well.

“Let’s imagine our children. They will inherit your beauty.” He sent. Although he did not know at that time, her fantasy was already a depiction of their lovely brick house amidst a blooming valley, preoccupied by their offspring.

One day, she asked whether she could invite him in, but she was in fear of him being frightened.

“I have so many troubles, I have always been hiding…”

“You can open up to me anytime you want.”

Finally, the princess decided to open the gate and welcome the knight. Yet she had no idea for what reason he had never entered her place on purpose of seeking for her? Despite what he said, she merely left the lock unlocked so that he could come in if he wanted. Nonetheless, he gave her questions neither about her tedious life at the castle nor what had turned into the monsters wandering. He did not come in. The gate had not ever been pushed in by him.

“I want you to be my Christmas gift.”

“I am already, just have to wait for you to open.”

The knight still did not intend to reveal herself on his own. He recommended his princess to come with him on his next journey, as his companion for life. But the princess herself had had a hard time to deal with the darkness roaming over the castle yard, on the rose petals and every morning dew stagnation. She told her knight to spare her a little more time, after that she would join his trip.

“I have found someone else. But I still love you as a friend.” That was the first time he texted her with such a long content in an enterprising mood.

“I wish you all the best things for your life.” Tons of questions conquered her thoughts, even though that was the only thing she could send him in response.

Knight had found his wanted companion, and he left the princess’s fortress in spite of the fact he barely touched the gate or made a little effort to look what was going inside her royal life. Little princess stared down from her room, echoing in her ears were the knight’s voice once he said they would have children together, or the moment he gently explored her physique outside the fortress albeit their later discontinuation.

But what about me?

“If there is anything I could ask you and then be answered, it’d be What about me? But my lord, I know that it doesn’t matter anymore whatever your response would be, since it doesn’t seem to keep you stay. Because of that, please be happy.”

She looked into the nought, whispering to herself.

The princess went to the fortress’s gate to lock it up again.
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I would say I have never written a short story like this until now, forgive me if the timeline might confuse you. However, the photo has spoken up where the princess was living, and also where the girl in the dialogues was.

Have a wonderful life ahead everyone, I hope all of us will not have to close our gates as the princess had done to hers.

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I have the feeling that this story has a lot to do with you... and since I sense that it is almost certain that it is, I can only tell you that this mermaid princess should not feel alone, because there is an old captain nearby willing to control those ugly monsters of the dark, make them board your ship and take them far away across the 7 seas to leave them there to their own fate.

The princess should not worry because new times are beginning.


Apart from all of the above, your story is very nice, although to be honest I find it a bit weak, as if something else was missing, maybe a couple of extra dialogues? Maybe try to involve one of the dark terrors that intervene and give the story a little more flavor? I would like to see it Safy.

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Your Content Is Awesome so I just sent 1 $BBH(2/5)@sapphireissafy! (Bitcoin Backed Hive) to your account on behalf of @contagio.

Well yes it has a lot to do with me. However, because of that, I didn't want to add more peaks into it. There are many things hidden behind the words, and you may sense the princess was already too exhausted to burst out anything.

Besides, the dialogues were not between the knight and princess, the castle and the fortress are just the girl's heart, and the princess is just her soul.

Thank you for your comment @contagio, I really appreciate it 💕🌼

You are welcome, I do it with great affection, I would like to give you a more complete answer at this moment, but I am exhausted, I have just finished producing a publication of 30 minutes or more of reading and I am not worth a penny at this moment.

I keep reading you and I appreciate you very much, keep that in mind!

That's okay, do not worry. I hope you have recovered from it already. If I am right, it is gonna be weekend there, so I wish you have a nice rest for weekend. I have read your current writing of "My life is settled", I should have left comment on that post instead, however, the things it emerged in me after a long while recalling urged me to tell you that one of yours was a breakthrough, I understood it totally. I can't explain it clearly to you, but I do get the beauty and also the grief, the anxiety, the loss, as well as the hidden dream behind. I really love it, even more than the wedding of the bumblebee and the ant.

@sapphireissafy The end of such stories is a bit sentimental and good, accepting any warrior does not work without the consent of that princess's family. best wishes for the future.

This is a very interesting and compelling story, @sapphireissafy. We naturally want the princess and her knight to live happily ever after, but it is not to be. The princess is not able to fully open the fortress. Very nice take on the January prompt!

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Oh my, the princess got her heart broken in a terrible way.
I do hope she gets the heart to open her gates once again to happiness.

My dear, princess's heart was already broken, that's why surrounding her was only shadow. She couldn't open up to the knight directly because she was afraid the same thing in the past would happen again, and indeed it happened. But she didn't have to try so hard to close the gate now then

I really do hope she finds happiness. Thank you for explaining.