This is brilliant, Riverflows. Can't wait to go find parts 2 and 3 on your blog.
That desire to feel needed, wanted, appreciated, attractive, and loved. So very compelling... and appealing to someone as lonely as Percy. I makes me wonder how appealing it might also be in reality to those not so lonely but simply feeling in need of a little shake-up in their love lives.
You write deliciously. The story is sensuous and filled with desire, but told in a delicate and sensitive way. You have a real gift.
Bravo!
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