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RE: Ms Greta Baumgarten's Mithridatum of Despair

in The Ink Well3 years ago

Oh, this is lovely Tim! I chuckled throughout. The imagery was fantastic. The way you played with words... 3.14 😂, the apple pie, the frozen pie 🙌 and Mithradatum (I looked that up as I came upon the word... I can't continue reading when I come across an unknown hehe). You painted such a fabulous character in Ms Greta, strong on the outside, vulnerable within... a little temptation to push her beyond her comfort zones.

This had me giggling.

She was taken by the moment – and she began to untie her apron, discarding it on the floor – an action, which she will forever remember as a rebellious carelessness, and not one to be repeated. She bent further over and removed her sensible flats with orthopedic support, embracing a quasi-sexuality as she peeled back her tan coloured knee-high socks.

This touched my heart.

She ached to crunch them under her bare feet, but she knew decorum would prohibit it.

And this was just brilliant!!!

She felt a certainty that the odds were around 3.14% - which sparked an idea, that she would ring his own doorbell, in the possession of a warm apple crumble.

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