Play while reading the poetry.Promesas bajo las aguas.
poco a poco se deja consumir,
entre las aguas del riachuelo,
sumergido en el rugido de la corriente,
sintiendo su cuerpo caer al vació.
Por las corrientes se ha dejado llevar,
hasta parar en un lugar árido,
seco,
como lo que pensó seria su alma.
Y aunque seco y vació este,
no hay aguas innegables para su renacer,
porque ha revivido una vez más.
No pienses en mentirte más,
tan claro veo como el renacer de las aguas,
la mentira no escapa de la verdad,
se escudriñe dentro de nuestra realidad.
Puedo terminar todo,
entre lagrimas caer en el estanque,
o en aquel viejo riachuelo de gran cascada,
esa que asemeja la tristeza de mi alma.
Aguas que se volvieron promesas,
promesas que se volvieron mentiras,
corrientes sinceras de palabrerías,
de algo que tuvimos porque ya no esta.
Underwater Promises
bit to bit it is allowed to consume,
among the waters of the creek,
immersed in the roar of the current,
feeling his body fall into the void.
He let himself be carried away by the currents,
until it stops in an arid place,
dry,
as what he thought his soul would be.
And though he dried up and emptied it,
there are no undeniable waters for its rebirth,
because it has been revived once again.
Don't think about lying to yourself anymore,
As clear as I see the rebirth of the waters,
the lie does not escape from the truth,
is scrutinized within our reality.
I can finish everything,
between tears fall into the pond,
or in that old stream with the big waterfall,
that which resembles the sadness of my soul.
Waters that became promises,
promises that became lies,
sincere currents of talk,
of something we had because it's gone.
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My pleasure :)
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Esto es precioso dude. No sabía que eras poeta. Buenísimo. Aunque me deprimió un poco. Hace mucho tiempo yo traté de escribir poesía, pero creo que apesto. ¡Un saludo!
Si perce road es poeta/escritor :) empece este mundo con eso por eso mi nombre "cuentos de camino". Inténtalo siempre tenemos un poeta interior que se alimenta de nuestros sentimientos.
Great poem! Realistic thou, pure in its words.
Thanks u sweet :)
I love how the metaphors bring this piece alive! Good job👏