Done. I'm sorry it's longer than usual. You know my usual complaint is I struggle to write more than 1200 odd words to make it less a flash fiction and more a short story, and I was trying pretty hard with this one to make it of decent length. Was experimenting with an omniscient narrator, which I don't usually do, and I think I was successful. Gah, I love the Ink Well for giving me space to experiment.
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Please experiment. We love you, @riverflows.
Aw... Blushing so hard!