Welcome my friend, The writing style is very informal and conversational, with the narrator directly addressing the reader at points. This gives it a casual, personal feel. The use of parentheses and fragments also adds to the stream-of-consciousness, dreamy effect.
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thank you so much for the welcome and for the feedback too. I will try to improve next time thanks have a great day and week ahead.
!giphy thanks
!PIZZA
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