Love story

in The Ink Well2 years ago (edited)

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Hello beautiful people . How are you guys. Hope you guys are all doing well. I am also well to . Ok let's come to the point.

Today I will gonna tell you about a prince and a princess . This is a great story of a true love . What will tell us that what is real love . This a great example of true love . This is exception couse this type of love don't exist . This type of love can only exist on the story or book . This can take a reality . It is very tough . Couse no one can love anyone like this . It's like a mythology .

The Story

Once upon a time there was a boy named karim . He is form a village named gouthampur . The village was very small . It is very far form the city . That's why they live their life by farming . The boy karim he is a very good and very claver type of person . He likes to play . He even don't stay at home all day . Often the local judy judge him . Everyone likes him . But for his work everyone buly him . He was a son of a shoe Maker . On that time every one make fun of him for that . The boy often swim in the river . Couse the village ghotampur was beside the yamuna river. He catches fish form the river . He have many friends but they often laugh couse his father is a show Maker. Beside The poorness and the claver ness . He was a very good boy . And he was very charming . Everyone was jealous of him . That's why everyone make fun of him .
On the other side there was a very beautiful girl of a rough king . The king was very bad . If he don't like anyone the order his soldier to kill him . But his doughtier is very good at heart and soul . Her name is princesses nila . She is very kind . she often helps poor and helpless people . In his fathers kingdom everyone love her and respect her . Fouse she is opposite of his father . She love her father but she don't like his work couse he often punish inosent poor and helpless people. Her father give punishment to them couse they ar poor and her father don't like poor people . He disgusted them . It is really impossible to make their love story successful . Couse the boy karim is really poor and the princess father don't like poor people . That's why it is like a dream for us to see those two together.

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But we know that life takes twist every time . This is the nature of our life circle. Life is like a wheelchair . It doesn't have any break or staring . Nobody knows when will it take corner . And that happens with both of them . One day karim was on the side of the river . On that time suddenly the princess arrived on the other side of the river . She was sitting beside the river and enjoying the wether . Suddenly her hat fall into the river . She tried to catch the hat but she was unable to catch the hat . On that moment the boy jumped into the river to impress her . We already know that the boy was very claver . And just he have gotten a chance to show his claverness.He got the hat and carry the hat to the princess . Then the princess appreciate his work and tell him that the hat was her mother . Her mother always wear that hat . The princess become very happy . And she wanted to give him some gold and silver . But the boy refuse couse he was fallen love with her . Then they goes each other house . The boy can not forget her couse she was in his mind . After few days he makes friend with the slaves of the princess . He tell the slave everything . Then the slave listen all his word and tell him that her father don't like any poor people . Then the slave give him a idea of a latter . The slave tell him to write a letter and give her . The boy said how will I give her . She lives in a huge castle and no one can go inside . Them the slave said that you won't go but I can give her . Then karim give her the letter . On the other hand the slave was a friend of the princess . Thats why she is close to the princess . After the princess got the latter she was very interested to meet the boy karim . Princess nila was interested couse no one have guts to give him a letter or wish to propose her. Couse everyone is afraid of his father .

Couse her father is very brutal . One day the slave fixed a meeting . Then they meet each other . After the meeting the princess was really impressed of him . Then they start their love story . After some day their love story was going very well . They meet each other to the side of the jungle. Their living their life happyly . One day they are talking on the jungle . Suddenly a solder of the king saw them talking . Then the soldier tell everything to the king . After that the king got really angry . And wanted to kill the boy. The king order to kill the whole family of the boy . Then the soldier kill his whole family . But somehow the boy ran away . He was hiding somewhere . After some time the boy want to meet the princess . He some how manage to climb up to the princess room . Then the princess got shoked . She thought that karim was dead by now . She huged her and started to cry . Karim told her to calm down . He told princess nila that it is not time for crying . It is time to make decision . Then they set their mind . They will run away really far . They are gonna execute their plan at midnight . when It was midnight they run away . somehow the guard got that . They called the king and started to follow them . It was a very dark night for them don't know about it . Again they are on that place where they first saw each other . The king order a soldier to throw a arrow . After the commend the soldier just throw . And then they arrow just hit on the boys chest . Then the boy fall in the ground . The girl started crying . The boy died in front of the girls eye . She can't baire his death . Then she take a desision . She took the arrow that killed the boy and stabed her self . Everyone tried to stop her but no one can stop her . And that's how their story ends . They died on the place where they meet on the first day . They don't live there love life but their love story got immortal . Every lovers remain there love story. They are example to everyone .

So that's is everyone . Thankyou so much for giving me your time. love you guys all ♥️

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That's a super bad end for the girl and the boy... And I think such stories aren't accepted or maybe not.

All the same, it's a good love story... Just didn't expect that end 😒

Can you help me improving my stories 😃 Do you like the story . What part you didn't like tell please 😞 Then I will fix that . And then I will try to write some new batter story 😃😃 please let me know 😞😞

Hi @ramsyxafridi. Thanks for posting in The Ink Well. And thank you for reading other writer's work. This helps build a strong community.

Since you are still new to our community, we'll share a few important rules as well as some recommendations.

Please sure sure to read The Ink Well community rules at the top of the Ink Well community page. You will find that we do not allow violent content. There are some acts of violence in your story that we normally would not allow, like the boy being killed by the arrow. Since you are new to community, we will just provide a important note to avoid graphic violence in the future.

And a few tips for you:

  1. We have some excellent resources for new writers, and writers who have a different native language in our catalog of fiction writing tips. For example, one of the posts we recommend is the post, help for the grammatically challenged which describes how to use Google Docs to draft your posts. Google Docs will highlight errors in your writing, and you can click on them to fix them.
  2. We recommend that you break up long paragraphs into shorter ones, as it is very difficult to read long paragraphs.

Thank you and keep writing!

Hello, @ramsyxafridi,

You have a lively imagination and a desire to write. That is a great beginning. This community is a place where writers grow. It is our pleasure to help them do that.

It would be good for you to follow the suggestions from the Ink Well comment below. The one about using Google docs is especially helpful. This would help you to correct some pesky errors that otherwise get in the way of a reader's enjoyment.

I hope you write again for us. Every time you write is an opportunity to grow and to network with other writers.

Wishing you good luck on Hive and in the Ink Well.