Brilliantly emotive, exquisitely told tale of trauma. However, I believe that there is a suggestion of incest and rape - I’m not sure, but I think you should check The Ink Well’s guide lines on this ❤️🤗💕
When she returned home it was already getting dark and Margarita told her mother that she was going to bed early because she had not slept well the night before. When she goes to bed she feels that there is a person in her room and sees a shadow near the window hidden behind the curtain. She is paralyzed, she tries to scream, but she can't and a terrible memory comes to her mind, it can't be happening again. Her brother covers her mouth and tries to throw her on the bed, she fights back as best she can, they struggle and she manages to push him off. She runs out of the room calling for help, but when she gets to her mother, she stops her and asks her what is wrong. She tells him what has happened. Her father and sister have also listened.
Thank you very much, for your comment and because you were right about the community rules that I did not take into account, perhaps because I thought I did not do it by not narrating the fact nor mentioning the name of the crime, although I recognize that it is obvious.
Greetings @isostylish
Don’t worry, I made the same mistake a few weeks ago. Sometimes we just write what’s in our heads without consideration for the rules. Nevertheless, your story was really lovely 🤗❤️💕
It's very true what you say, at that moment I didn't think about the rules but about the story I was developing. Thank you very much @itsostylish for encouraging me.
Greetings and happy night.
Thank you very much for your comment, although I must tell you that my post was removed for dealing with an act of violence, which is in contradiction with the rules of the community.
Regards @hazem91
Hello @popurri. The story is brilliant and all-too- real (unfortunately), but @itsostylish is correct. This violates community standards. We cannot allow rape, and especially incest, in the community. This has to be a standard enforced across the Inkwell. There can't be exceptions because then the floodgates open on this subject and the stories pour in.
You are a valued member of the community. A sensitive, insightful writer, but this subject is, sadly, off limits.
I understand this community rule and although I had already read it, I did it again. I let myself be carried away by the reality that unfortunately happens very often and although I do not explicitly mention what happened, it is clear the reason why the protagonist of my story suffers the loss of her memory and isolation from reality.
Grateful that we always learn from our mistakes.
I wanted to know if I can continue writing in the community
Greetings @theinkwell
Brilliantly emotive, exquisitely told tale of trauma. However, I believe that there is a suggestion of incest and rape - I’m not sure, but I think you should check The Ink Well’s guide lines on this ❤️🤗💕
Thank you very much, for your comment and because you were right about the community rules that I did not take into account, perhaps because I thought I did not do it by not narrating the fact nor mentioning the name of the crime, although I recognize that it is obvious.
Greetings @isostylish
Don’t worry, I made the same mistake a few weeks ago. Sometimes we just write what’s in our heads without consideration for the rules. Nevertheless, your story was really lovely 🤗❤️💕
It's very true what you say, at that moment I didn't think about the rules but about the story I was developing. Thank you very much @itsostylish for encouraging me.
Greetings and happy night.
Probably her passion for painting provides an escape from a harsh reality. I wish I had a similar refuge ^^
nice story
Thank you very much for your comment, although I must tell you that my post was removed for dealing with an act of violence, which is in contradiction with the rules of the community.
Regards @hazem91
Hello @popurri. The story is brilliant and all-too- real (unfortunately), but @itsostylish is correct. This violates community standards. We cannot allow rape, and especially incest, in the community. This has to be a standard enforced across the Inkwell. There can't be exceptions because then the floodgates open on this subject and the stories pour in.
You are a valued member of the community. A sensitive, insightful writer, but this subject is, sadly, off limits.
We know you will understand.
I understand this community rule and although I had already read it, I did it again. I let myself be carried away by the reality that unfortunately happens very often and although I do not explicitly mention what happened, it is clear the reason why the protagonist of my story suffers the loss of her memory and isolation from reality.
Grateful that we always learn from our mistakes.
I wanted to know if I can continue writing in the community
Greetings @theinkwell
We love your stories. More, please :)
Thank you very much 😊