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Wow, amazing time travel
Well done

A very simplistic way to write about time travel, I was able to understand the whole storyline.

I can't believe this is your first story here, I'll be looking forward to your stories.

Hi @perochukwu, welcome to Hive and to The Ink Well.

You write an interesting story with an unexpected turn. The symbolism and re-enactment of an "original sin" in a different way was nice. However, the resolution of the trial would have benefited from more details.

Thank you for sharing that story with us, We ask all our writers to engage in the community by commenting on at least 2 other stories in the community, this helps you and the community to grow and thrive.

Keep writing.

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